Wednesday 24 June 2015

Pride Goeth A Fall ------ Wordy Wednesday #4- June 2015 @B-A-R


Wow Candle Rani today you seem to so happy! The table exclaimed . Mr.Rajeev Sharma is going on blind date with Lolita yaar and so... you being so happy to see him change like this after separating him from his wife Candle Rani not done the table says this in matter of fact tone " Don't take pride in whatever you have or do"the table forewarns her.
Rajeev enters his empty house he feels bad for his behaviour towards his wife  just because she touched the raw hurt which his exes had given him.
Staring at the  beautiful candle  which is lit on the table.Rajeev bangs the table  hard and suddenly sees the light and fan getting switched  on and hears a voice at door that criticize him for irresponsible behaviour .Looking at his annoyed wife's facial expressions who is fed up with  his  moody swings he smiles at her in contentment and pleads for forgiveness for his rotten behaviour  .She forgives him by taking  the candle lamp away from the table so as to serve him  his  favourite  hot  vegetable biryani  chaval . Few minutes later the table feels happy that Candle Rani's pride is tarnished as his head is garnished with Rajeev's favourite food items. 


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4 comments:

  1. interesting.....lol....its unique...

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    1. Thank you Sreeja :-).
      Thanks for dropping in .
      Have a nice day.
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  2. Nice take on the prompt. I like your idea of giving a voice to the table and the candle. Nice story.

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    1. Thank you Inderpreet :-).It feels so nice to see you here after a very long time.
      Have a nice day .
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